anyone up for some haiku?

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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby Choosejoy » 05 Sep 2010, 11:30

a gorgeous new day
night's warming fire now ashes
sun warming fall's nip



good health to all xo
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 05 Sep 2010, 15:52

sun warming fall's nip
seasons of the altered states
revitalizing.
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby Choosejoy » 06 Sep 2010, 13:41

revitalizing
connection by absorbing
our explanations
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 06 Sep 2010, 14:09

our explanations
sounding more like excuses
falling on deaf ears. :whistle:
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby Choosejoy » 06 Sep 2010, 14:14

falling on deaf ears
arguments lead to blowup
we listen instead
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 06 Sep 2010, 14:22

we listen instead
to the voices in our head
forget what I said. :lol:
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby Choosejoy » 06 Sep 2010, 18:59

forget what I said
although it was not a lie
better kept secret
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby himynameisSarah » 06 Sep 2010, 19:04

better kept secret
festering like a heart ache
walls too strong to break
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby Choosejoy » 06 Sep 2010, 19:19

walls too strong to break
can sometimes be scaled, hoping
for a soft landing
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 12 Sep 2010, 11:01

for a soft landing
wings guiding windless descent
flight of the phantom.
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