inhale
what is missing?
the element of man,
please don't wake me from my slumber
day dreams.
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continuing cinquain
Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 03 Sep 2010, 08:42
day dreams
mind wandering
skipping along the lake
pebbles skimming surface catching
morning
mind wandering
skipping along the lake
pebbles skimming surface catching
morning
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 05 Sep 2010, 15:56
morning
rise a new dawn
light slowly skimming eyes
opening vista of new day
marvel.
rise a new dawn
light slowly skimming eyes
opening vista of new day
marvel.
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 06 Sep 2010, 11:36
marvel
at our stubborn
inability to
accept each other as we are
today
at our stubborn
inability to
accept each other as we are
today
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by moon willow » 06 Sep 2010, 11:39
wow, joy...we synchronized again...and with the same last word this time! love your message.
marvel
that it's monday
already work beckons
though a national holiday
today
today
with sun shining
and cooler air out there
it will be a good working day
I swear
I swear
my cough must ease
my lungs must get a break
perhaps I need to eat more steak (:
to heal
to heal
I need to rest
my body needs focus
must try to get off this work horse
one day
one day
I'll breathe easy
taking in the beauty
on a gorgeous day like today
magic
marvel
that it's monday
already work beckons
though a national holiday
today
today
with sun shining
and cooler air out there
it will be a good working day
I swear
I swear
my cough must ease
my lungs must get a break
perhaps I need to eat more steak (:
to heal
to heal
I need to rest
my body needs focus
must try to get off this work horse
one day
one day
I'll breathe easy
taking in the beauty
on a gorgeous day like today
magic
However long the night, the dawn will break.
~ African proverb ~
~ African proverb ~
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 06 Sep 2010, 13:30
magic
coincidence
marvel becomes today
different paths to the same place
surprise!
coincidence
marvel becomes today
different paths to the same place
surprise!
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by moon willow » 11 Sep 2010, 12:04
surprise
a humbleness
descends behind my eyes
a sadness rises from within
today
a humbleness
descends behind my eyes
a sadness rises from within
today
However long the night, the dawn will break.
~ African proverb ~
~ African proverb ~
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 11 Sep 2010, 16:46
today
souls coming close
again bearing witness
to the mourning song of those left
behind
souls coming close
again bearing witness
to the mourning song of those left
behind
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 12 Sep 2010, 10:48
Behind
the magic veils
symmetry in motion
moving silhouttes rehearsing
stunning.
the magic veils
symmetry in motion
moving silhouttes rehearsing
stunning.
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 12 Sep 2010, 13:25
stunning
complexity
numerous northeastern
species each changing hue in their
due time
complexity
numerous northeastern
species each changing hue in their
due time
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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