away
giant green boughs
shading the calm waters
overhanging the misty blue
tranquil..
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continuing cinquain
Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 30 Aug 2010, 10:23
tranquil
lake smooth as skin
partiers sleeping late
leaving morning to birds trilling
softly
lake smooth as skin
partiers sleeping late
leaving morning to birds trilling
softly
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 30 Aug 2010, 22:48
softly
harmony breached
unsettling calm anxious
echoed shrills of flame uprisings
panic.
harmony breached
unsettling calm anxious
echoed shrills of flame uprisings
panic.
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 30 Aug 2010, 23:58
panic
calms with deep breaths
given it's own time to
reintegrate absorbed into
the whole
calms with deep breaths
given it's own time to
reintegrate absorbed into
the whole
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 31 Aug 2010, 00:02
the whole
says the rabbit
it's right where I left it
right between the two legged tree
thump in!
says the rabbit
it's right where I left it
right between the two legged tree
thump in!
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 31 Aug 2010, 21:33
thumpin
bass lines echo
bounce shore to shore, building
layers of sound, kudos to teen
spirit
bass lines echo
bounce shore to shore, building
layers of sound, kudos to teen
spirit
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by moon willow » 31 Aug 2010, 23:35
spirit
flows from within
carried on silent wind
expanding, contracting in all
welcome
flows from within
carried on silent wind
expanding, contracting in all
welcome
However long the night, the dawn will break.
~ African proverb ~
~ African proverb ~
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 01 Sep 2010, 03:06
welcome
your Hey, Baby
comes across the phone lines
putting homecoming visions in
my mind
your Hey, Baby
comes across the phone lines
putting homecoming visions in
my mind
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by moon willow » 01 Sep 2010, 11:56
my mind
fuzzy with pain
as my breathing struggles
to inhale and exhale with ease
help, please
help, please
is this dis-ease?
is this lung mess from stress?
relaxing into happiness
I smile
I smile
then cough awhile
getting worn out daily
with my lungs breathing just barely
sleepy
fuzzy with pain
as my breathing struggles
to inhale and exhale with ease
help, please
help, please
is this dis-ease?
is this lung mess from stress?
relaxing into happiness
I smile
I smile
then cough awhile
getting worn out daily
with my lungs breathing just barely
sleepy
However long the night, the dawn will break.
~ African proverb ~
~ African proverb ~
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 01 Sep 2010, 14:31
sleepy
I drag myself
to mourning prayers trading
trading exhaled grief for joyful
inhale
feel better, willow xx
I drag myself
to mourning prayers trading
trading exhaled grief for joyful
inhale
feel better, willow xx
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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