Turn me
one direction
then turn me back again
and what did you expect to find?
not me!
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continuing cinquain
Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 28 Aug 2010, 12:50
not me!
yes, it is me!
depths of gloom, or joy's gift
September roller coaster, still
it's me
yes, it is me!
depths of gloom, or joy's gift
September roller coaster, still
it's me
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 28 Aug 2010, 13:12
it's me
ringing your bell
just returning from hell
dressed in red with my tail and horns
cunning!
ringing your bell
just returning from hell
dressed in red with my tail and horns
cunning!
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 28 Aug 2010, 13:23
cunning
scares me silly
efforts put to deceit
what satisfaction lives trumping
naive
scares me silly
efforts put to deceit
what satisfaction lives trumping
naive
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 29 Aug 2010, 11:55
naive? 
hard to believe!
the tales of innocence
that lurk behind those eyelashes
winking!
hard to believe!
the tales of innocence
that lurk behind those eyelashes
winking!
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by moon willow » 29 Aug 2010, 12:02
winking
with just one eye
creating expression
and while focusing attention
we smile
with just one eye
creating expression
and while focusing attention
we smile
However long the night, the dawn will break.
~ African proverb ~
~ African proverb ~
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Re: continuing cinquain
by *Manny* » 29 Aug 2010, 12:07
we see
with deception
only fooling ourselves
avoiding the truth at all cost
lights out.
morning Willow! xo Yikes, ya did it too me again!
with deception
only fooling ourselves
avoiding the truth at all cost
lights out.
morning Willow! xo Yikes, ya did it too me again!
REALLY?? Get a Life!!
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 29 Aug 2010, 14:03
lights out
creeping to bed
neighbor's music bouncing
across the lake, end of summer,
woohoo
creeping to bed
neighbor's music bouncing
across the lake, end of summer,
woohoo
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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Re: continuing cinquain
by lagan » 29 Aug 2010, 21:17
crouching
great blue heron
lifts herself from the sea
flaps sweetly onto a tall piling
and shrugs
great blue heron
lifts herself from the sea
flaps sweetly onto a tall piling
and shrugs
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Re: continuing cinquain
by Choosejoy » 29 Aug 2010, 22:17
and shrugs
the sadness off
her shoulders watching it
as it rises slowly drifting
away
^^^beautiful, lagan, (the only other last line is your first thread)
the sadness off
her shoulders watching it
as it rises slowly drifting
away
^^^beautiful, lagan, (the only other last line is your first thread)
"Ring the bells that still can ring, forget your perfect offering, there is a crack, a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen
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