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anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 28 Apr 2010, 20:13

three lines, 5, 7, 5, I'll start out, follow along if ya like

Stars of night magic
shimmering with a wild light
a cloudless heaven.
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby belinda » 28 Apr 2010, 20:56

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Do you want this to link? Or for us to just profer a haiku?

A cloudless heaven
but over all a white shroud -
Sunshine on the snow.
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby ambien girl » 28 Apr 2010, 21:50

Sunshine on the snow
and prismatic glittering
delighted senses
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 28 Apr 2010, 22:09

delighted senses
filling my mind with visions
some naughty, some not.

Hi Ambien, good to see ya gal, and a hello to Belinda. I'd like us to link it Belinda, please and thank you.
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby ambien girl » 28 Apr 2010, 22:48

some naughty, some not
I peruse my lingerie
but naked is good

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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 28 Apr 2010, 22:53

Butt naked is good :lol:
mother natures true colors
wearing birthday suit.
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby ambien girl » 29 Apr 2010, 02:49

wearing birthday suit
let us skinny dip and all
under the moon light
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 29 Apr 2010, 03:05

under the moonlight
where we first found our kisses
days of innocence.

How do I edit that red tag under my posts? Can't seem to find it now.
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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby belinda » 29 Apr 2010, 05:59

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User control panel > Profile > Edit signature.

Days of innocence:
A child playing with her doll
in the red-light streets.


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Re: anyone up for some haiku?

Postby *Manny* » 29 Apr 2010, 12:16

In the red-light streets
stories from concrete jungle
tears fall for Emma.

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